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P.S… i do not intend upon removing this story published. i am essay it only for my personal pleasure. ps… i know which no a single is expected to do this, though PLEASE don't take my story. appreciate we again. 
March 29th, 2009 at 3:23 pm
That was a very intriguing knockoff. I truly love your style of writing. The Ilario chapters are very much like Midnight Sun and Edward’s point of view. There are some typos in the writing, but that can be easily fixed. Keep going. But, try to make it more of your own. I like how you’ve taken many different ideas about vampires and mashed them into one story. It reminds me of Twilight and the tv show Moonlight. I hope to read the rest of this story sometime.